Peter's Scribbles

Peter's Scribbles

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I bet you don't care anymore
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I bet you don't care anymore

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Peter Smetanick
Nov 14, 2024
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a man standing in a field with his back to the camera
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I start going 
Without showing, 
That I needed 
All that she did.

I don’t know why 
I stumbled, 
But I found out 
When we crumbled. 

I, I bet you don’t care anymore. 

Everything is different now that you are gone,
Nothing will ever be the same.
We wake up in separate beds, 
Hoping to move on again, 
But I just can’t stand…

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